Damn those beats are nice, you make them yourself?
hmm.... out of pitch?
feels like the vocals and the instruments aren't in the same pitch :P Sounds really weird hehe... Try changing the main pitch of your instruments? Dunno just dosen't merge in a good way :S
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Nice piece, really enjoyed it. Can't wait for the full version of it :)
How'd u do the piano play btw? Did u play it by hand or did u do it in the program?
Cheers DJ Qizee
I got the piano from a program called Nexus :)
U MUST FINNISH THIS
This is really good!!!!!!!! U must finnish this piece, it'll be great man!
Looking forward for the finished version, as far as I am concerned I can't find any ''wrong doings'' in this piece, well I'm not a pro at this but HEY! I can tell if it sounds good or bad, and this definitely sounds good! 4/5 8/10 gonna rate when the WHOLE version comes out :) i'll be waiting
<<<Good Job Keep It Up>>>
thanks heaps Qizee.
I will definetly try to finish it.
Still having some serious trouble with it tho xD
hey man! that's a good remix hey! I liked it, though it was a bit weak dunno how to explain it, but I liked it lol :P 5/5 9/10
<<Good Job Keep It Up>>
Nice song, I really like the melody! I only miss 1 thing here, and that is variation on the melody, perhaps u could add some new notes etc. Anyways good job on the song!
omg!! Great melody, great drums BUT!! The thing I miss and which I do believe would be awesome is some nice BASS! Else then that, really nice song good job! 5/5 9/10
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<<Good Job Keep It Up!>>
Hey thanks man.
i havn't use a bass cause it was better without
and i have no good bass ;S
it was okay
It was kind of repetitive and didn't change so much in the progression of the song... Is the song even done? I'd say u should add more variety in the song and it could get awesome, perhaps u could change the melody or add another melody who works with the current (?) Thus, the ambience was soothing indeed, it did create this ''dreamish'' atmosphere! Anyways good job 4/5 8/10
yes, it is a bit repitive ...
Works as a BG music though ;D
u did it at 0:27 and at 2:17 but not at 1:30????
Yeah, your melodies sure is good and the intro just blows you away! Really good actually, but my question is, u did connect the song at 0:27 and 2:17 with the new melodies, like welcoming them. At 1:30 it sounds like u totally changed the song?? I wonder then if this piece is completed :S I'd love to here the full version as it's really good now! 5/5 9/10
~Cheers! Keep It Up Man~
Ya I started to get really frustrated with this song and just decided to put it out. Because of that I didn't really finish some of the transitions, so sorry about that.
Thanks for the ccomment
God dammit dude! You just need some drums and you're there! Really niceeee guitar I loved it! And the intro really catches you, u feel ease, and then the guitar comes in ure like '' Ohh yeaah'' I Liked it really! Cheers keep it up man! U get my 5/5 9/10
Thank you very much (: I really appreciate your review. If you liked this, maybe you will enjoy the first version!
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